I got my 30 hours in for Camp NaNo, but there’s still so much more to write/clean up for Gaia’s Hands. Every day, I think about what could be missing from the document:
- Is there enough description?
- Is Jeanne and Josh’s budding relationship going too slowly? Too quickly?
- Are there enough female characters?
- Should I have taken Annie Majors out when I took the Eric/Annie relationship out for being too complicating?
- Is the danger ratcheting up enough?
- Do I care about this book anymore?
Honestly, about the last point, I’m not feeling it at all. I feel like this is a hodge-podge of slop and I can’t figure out how to make it into a book.
Good wishes are welcome.
Words Like Me 